The Shadow of the Vigilant: A Tale of the Last Offering
Chapter 1: The Silent Mourning
I can still see that animal in my mind: a black-and-brown mongrel, always in the same spot, lying on a grave at the far edge of the cemetery. Day after day, night after night, he stayed there. A month went by, and he hadn’t moved more than a few steps. His eyes never blinked toward us—always staring into the distance, as if waiting for someone who would never come back. People whispered that he was simply mourning.
Neighbors left offerings: bowls of water, pieces of meat, fresh bread. But he hardly touched them. He seemed to belong more to the world of shadows than to ours.
Then, one afternoon, a veterinarian came to town to check on some livestock. We mentioned the “mourning dog,” hoping maybe he could ease his suffering. At first, the vet laughed gently… but when we described the strange details, his face went pale. “Animals don’t starve themselves without reason,” he muttered. “There’s more to this than grief.”
The following morning he went with us to see the grave. Slowly, he crouched beside the dog, touched its fur, and began a careful examination. His expression shifted from curiosity to shock. He leaned closer, checked again, then looked back at us with wide eyes.
Finally, he whispered words none of us will ever forget:
“This isn’t mourning. This… is something I’ve never encountered in all my years of practice…”
Chapter 2: The Frozen Bond
The veterinarian, a man named Dr. Vargas, rose slowly, as if the air of the cemetery weighed more heavily on him than on us. He pointed to the dog’s neck with a trembling finger.
—Look closely—he said in a voice barely audible—. There’s a wound. It’s not an open wound, but the skin is… frozen. As if an icy force had touched it. And it’s connected to the earth.
We moved closer, curiosity fighting against a fear that was chilling our blood. We saw a small scar on the animal’s neck, a pale mark that snaked like a dead root. It seemed as if the skin in that area had lost all feeling and warmth. The dog, which until then had remained motionless, let out a low, menacing growl. Its eyes, once sad and distant, now looked at us with a primitive fury.
—He’s not starving himself—Dr. Vargas muttered, his voice now firm and filled with a new conviction—. The dog is being fed. Not with food, but with… energy. He’s connected to something beneath the earth, something that is draining his vitality and preventing him from moving. His life doesn’t belong to him; it’s being used to maintain something. This animal is a vigilante.
The word hit us like a punch. Not a vigilante out of love, but a forced guardian. The whispers of mourning turned into a murmur of terror. People began to retreat, making the sign of the cross. The grave, which had once been a place of rest, had become a focal point of fear.
Dr. Vargas, however, stood his ground. He knelt down again, pulled out a scalpel and, with a determination that seemed foolish to us, tried to cut the hair around the wound for a better look. The moment the tip of the scalpel touched the frozen skin, the dog howled. It wasn’t a howl of pain, but a scream of pure agony, as if the earth itself were tearing. The sound was so inhuman that some of those present fell to their knees, their hands over their ears. The wound began to glow with a faint, bluish light, and the air around the animal became icy, causing vapor to come out of our mouths in the middle of the day. Dr. Vargas backed away, his face a mask of terror. The scalpel fell to the ground, echoing in the silence that followed the howl.
The dog, exhausted by the reaction, collapsed back onto the grave, but its eyes, fixed on nothing, now shone with the same bluish glow as the wound.
Chapter 3: A Secret Under the Tombstone
Dr. Vargas refused to leave. Scientific curiosity and a sense of morality pushed him to stay. He asked us to dig up the grave. The idea was met with fear and rejection. The people of the town, deeply superstitious, believed that unearthing a dead person would bring misfortune.
—Sir, the deceased was Ramiro Guzmán—said one of the elders, his voice trembling—. He was a… respected man.
Dr. Vargas looked at him, his gaze no longer that of a scientist, but of a detective.
—Respected? Or feared?—he asked. The elder lowered his gaze, unable to respond. The silence was all the confirmation Dr. Vargas needed.
Ramiro Guzmán had been a reserved, solitary man. He had a reputation for healing illnesses with herbs and spells, but his methods were dark and his reputation, a constant rumor of black magic and dealings with things that had no name. The dog, which no one in the town had seen before, had appeared out of nowhere on the day of Ramiro’s burial. Now, everything fit.
After a night of persuasion and promises, Dr. Vargas got permission from the priest to unearth the grave. A small group of brave souls, myself among them, gathered at dawn with shovels and picks. The dog, upon seeing us, got up with difficulty, its blue eyes glowing with a light of warning. But Dr. Vargas approached carefully and whispered to it. It seemed the animal understood him. The dog, named Shadow by Dr. Vargas, moved away from the group with the same heavy sadness with which it had arrived, but it didn’t attack us. It sat at a safe distance, watching us, like a guardian who had given up.
The shovels hit the ground with a dull sound. The smell of damp earth and rotting flowers filled the air. The coffin appeared. It was old, of simple wood, but something wasn’t right. Thick iron chains wrapped around it, and on the lid there was a series of strange symbols, hastily carved. Dr. Vargas examined them with a frown, and a palpable terror took hold of his face.
—They are not symbols of protection—he murmured, his eyes fixed on the drawing of a spiral with an arrow pointing downwards—. It’s a symbol of containment. He… is not here to rest.
And then, one of the men hit the lid with a shovel. The sound of the breaking wood and the echo of the open grave resonated in the cemetery.
Chapter 4: The Root of Evil
What we saw was not the body of Ramiro Guzmán. It was a skeleton, yes, but its body was not resting in peace. It was curled up, like a baby in the womb. The top of its skull was open, and from it a twisted black root came out, extending to the bottom of the coffin. The root was the same frozen mark we had seen on Shadow’s neck. It was connected to the grave. Dr. Vargas explained it.
—This man did something horrible, something that cost him his soul. But his body… his body is the vessel of something more. The root is the connection between his body, the energy of the earth and the dog. He is not sleeping. He is… feeding.
As Dr. Vargas spoke, the root from Ramiro’s skull began to throb. A slow, constant pulse, like a heart beating in the darkness. The dog, Shadow, began to howl. It was not a howl of pain, but one of terror. He was trapped, connected to a creature that was not of this world, a creature that was feeding on his life.
Dr. Vargas, with a courage we didn’t know he possessed, knelt down and touched the root. Shadow’s blue light became brighter, and a smell of sulfur filled the air. Dr. Vargas screamed in pain. The root had burned him, leaving a black mark on his finger.
—We can’t touch it—he said, his voice trembling—. We have to break the bond.
The whispers of the elders and the stories of Ramiro Guzmán came back to our minds. He had made deals with demons, he had offered sacrifices to the deities of the mine. The rumors of a pact with an underground being that gave him riches and power were confirmed. The dog, Shadow, was not a guardian, but an offering, a sacrifice to keep the being under the ground in a state of stillness. The grave was not a place of rest, but a cage. And Shadow was the lock.
Chapter 5: The Final Confrontation
The sun set, painting the sky red and orange. The night arrived with a cold breeze and air filled with a fear that could be felt on the skin. Dr. Vargas, with a plan in mind, gathered us. He needed our help to free the dog.
—We must cut the root—he said, showing a sharp and rusty gardening tool.
The elders begged him not to.
—If you cut it, you will release it—one of them said—. The creature will awaken. Its soul is in the root.
But Dr. Vargas did not flinch.
—Its soul is in the root, yes. But the dog’s energy is keeping it dormant. If we release it, the creature will wither. The dog has absorbed its energy. The dog is the key.
With the help of the priest, who gave us his blessing, Dr. Vargas approached the grave. Shadow looked at him, his blue eyes shining in the darkness. The animal approached the veterinarian, as if it knew that liberation was near.
Dr. Vargas knelt down, took the tool and with a quick movement, cut the root.
What happened next was a chaos of terror. Shadow’s blue light became brighter, almost blinding. The root, which extended from Ramiro’s skull, writhed like a snake. A smell of sulfur and rotten flesh filled the air. A moan, a sound that was not of this world, resonated in the cemetery. The earth around the grave cracked and twisted, as if something were trying to get out.
Dr. Vargas, with a cry of pain, fell to his knees. Shadow fainted, and his blue light faded, leaving his body in the darkness.
The moan grew louder. The grave opened, and a dark, formless figure rose from it. The creature, a mixture of shadows and roots, extended towards us. Its scream, a howl of pure rage, made us fall to our knees.
Dr. Vargas, despite his wound, stood up. His face, pale and sweaty, had a look of determination. He took a silver cross from his pocket and put it on his wound. A dense, white vapor rose from the wound, and the creature howled in pain.
—Your power has weakened—Dr. Vargas said—. The dog has absorbed your energy. Now you are weak.
The creature, weakened by the contact with the cross, writhed, and became smaller. It disintegrated, turning into dust and ashes. The cemetery was filled with a deafening silence, broken only by the beating of our hearts.
Chapter 6: A New Dawn
The sun rose, bringing with it light and hope. Dr. Vargas, exhausted and wounded, stood up and approached Shadow. The dog, who had been unconscious, opened his eyes. They were no longer blue, but a warm brown color. They were no longer filled with pain and fury, but with gratitude and love.
Shadow, now free, licked Dr. Vargas’s wounded hand. The animal was a little smaller than we had thought, and had scars on its body, the marks of the suffering it had endured.
The story spread throughout the town. The people, who had once feared the grave, now respected it. Dr. Vargas stayed in the town, taking care of Shadow. The dog became a symbol of hope, a reminder that, even in the deepest darkness, light can prevail.
The story of Shadow, the mourning dog who was a forced guardian, became a legend. Ramiro Guzmán’s grave was sealed, and the town learned that forgiveness is more powerful than fear.
Shadow, now free, lived with Dr. Vargas. He was a happy, playful dog. But sometimes, at night, he would approach Ramiro’s grave, and with a low growl, he would remind us that evil always waits, but that there are always those who fight for the light.
And I, who had witnessed it all, will never forget what I saw. A animal’s mourning was not pain, but an offering. A false mourning that hid a terrifying truth. And the end of mourning brought with it liberation, a miracle that became a reality in the light of the moon.
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